Thursday, 6 April 2017
Camp Merc Acrostic Poem
Walt: edit and revise my writing for clarity and impact in response to feed back
Learning Reflection
I was able to change some spelling mistakes because Jordan told me to.
Next time I will try my best to ask for feedback from my fellow class mates so I can improve in my writing and try to change some of my words to make them year 6 words. Also next time I will try to look for incorrect spelling not Jordan unless I need . If i'm not sure I will sound out the words I don't know and if i'm done I will ask some people in my class for feedback.
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Great Camp Merc poem Kahlan you have written some interesting ideas. Well done for listening to Jordan's feedback because this has helped you to improve your writing.
Remember to use those capital letters in the correct places please.
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